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Tuesday, August 22, 2006

Half

With half-opened eyes
he set down the glass
half empty
and walked halfway through the field
with half a smile etched on his face
he cocked his head
halfway up
and saw half a moon
laboring across half a sky
(for the other half
was half a world away)
In spite of himself
he let out half a laugh
and realized
that half of his energy
was devoted to thinking in half
while the other half
was devoted to half of nothing
which he was aware, too, was nothing
with the thinking half he wondered
half-heartedly
if things could have been different
if he could have changed the half
that needed changing
if given half the chance
and with the half devoted to nothing
wondered aloud
to a half-listening audience of one
how one
that stood so proudly whole
is now splitered shamefully
in half.

4 Comments:

Blogger pog mo thoin said...

Wow! What kind of break up (halfing - i think i am on the right track) inspired this! Its great! I like the moon labouring across the sky. Good stuff!

4:15 AM  
Blogger Steve H said...

"if things could have been different
if he could have changed the half
that needed changing"

nice line, dude.

6:23 AM  
Blogger Simone said...

I really liked this one!

"and with the half devoted to nothing
wondered aloud
to a half-listening audience of one
how one
that stood so proudly whole
is now splitered shamefully
in half."

that last thought is really good...good stuff!

11:28 AM  
Blogger Dim said...

Pog: I can't even remember which breakup that was. In any case, I was probably listening to Black Sheets of Rain by Bob Mould a lot.

Thanks Hotwire and Simone!

- D.

1:07 PM  

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